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Pulse 11th 2010

Post  PaulNormus on Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:19 pm

*The Cameras head toward the backstage area*

Paul Normus Walking Getting Ready For the Tag Team Match

Paul Normus See Cedry2k Look At Him Goes to Him

Paul Normus: " Look Am Not Here to Talk About Anything Else , When We Stand Out There In The Ring I Just Wanna be A Team .......... Will ..........will That Be Allright "

Cedry2k : "Ok This Match We Have To Win It If We Dont You Will Face consequences "

Paul Normus : " Ok What Constances?"

Cedry2k Smills And Walks Away

*The Screen Fades to black*





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Re: Pulse 11th 2010

Post  brandonklossner on Tue Aug 10, 2010 12:55 am

constances==> consequences and prrof read a little bit there are a few grammatical errors to correct

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Re: Pulse 11th 2010

Post  Paleghost on Tue Aug 10, 2010 6:25 am

Right about consequences but the rest is ok. Not grammatically correct but alot of people don't have awesome English so it's cool. Biggest thing is changing the word to "consequences"
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